Comments on: I Breathe | Breath senryu poem example | 112008 http://haikuhabits.com/2008/11/20/after-birth-haiku/ How to Write Short Poems for Personal Growth: A Forum for Examples and Commentary Wed, 09 May 2012 20:49:11 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.com/ By: Borut http://haikuhabits.com/2008/11/20/after-birth-haiku/#comment-8 Sun, 04 Jan 2009 21:53:10 +0000 http://haikuhabits.com/?p=12#comment-8 In between, as Issa might comment:

Tub to tub
The whole journey
Just hub-bub!

- trans. Lewis Mackenzie

]]> By: aj3d http://haikuhabits.com/2008/11/20/after-birth-haiku/#comment-7 Thu, 20 Nov 2008 18:01:26 +0000 http://haikuhabits.com/?p=12#comment-7 Of course you can’t know for sure today what you will do tomorrow, but apart from that it’s very nice.

]]> By: Ken Wagner http://haikuhabits.com/2008/11/20/after-birth-haiku/#comment-6 Thu, 20 Nov 2008 10:25:54 +0000 http://haikuhabits.com/?p=12#comment-6 It was almost an afterthought, which I guess is what you have been telling me. Capturing the birth of moment, just before it wisps away.

]]> By: aj3d http://haikuhabits.com/2008/11/20/after-birth-haiku/#comment-5 Thu, 20 Nov 2008 08:07:35 +0000 http://haikuhabits.com/?p=12#comment-5 Wow! Like it!

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